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KITTEN JUNKIE (talk) 14:30, 7 October 2022 (UTC)
| Humour: | 3 | Not humorous. Wit is being substituted for humor. |
| Concept: | 6 | Conceptually, for what it is, is good. That being said the name distracts rather than adds to the entertainment. The name is too 'smart'. |
| Prose and formatting: | 5 | Prose: There is little. It IS silly all the way thru and for THAT it's very good-VERY high in complete sillyness, nonsense, and babble. It appeals to those to whom this appeals, it is for a particular taste. Entertaining, certainly. Creative, very much so. This article is random nonsense & is not funny. |
| Images: | 2 | The image choice serves the images not the story. U got images, they are good, but distract from the news story due to lacking relevance to the story. For God's sakes, delete an image or two and put in one of a butt worm being barbequed. Duh. |
| Miscellaneous: | 8 | A lot of effort went into this article! Good job! |
| Final Score: | 24 | Be less witty. Witty is just to serve the Writer not the Reader. You've got potential and work ethic and a motor, good. Switch ur plan. I recommend backing up, find EXISTING news articles, and rewrite THEM. If this Writer keeps writing as sharply as this some very very good material could be appearing. This Writer should definitely continue contributing-the Writer has potential. Start with MUCH shorter articles tho. |
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