Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Zurgenburger

- Kenji - 23:22, 31 March 2009 (UTC)

...I guess I'll review this one. Sir Groovester | Contributions | Talk Page 04:34, 5 April 2009 (UTC)

Humour:	1	I'll be honest. This page is entirely devoid of humor. It is awful. Horrible. Terrible. Not funny in the least. The article is random. Random is not funny. Throwing Chuck Norris into an article will not make your article funny. Throwing George Bush into an article will not make it funny. Throwing all the other ridiculous crap that you did will not make the article funny. And since this article is entirely composed of random strings of words with no relation to each other whatsoever, the article is not funny. Not even an iota.
Concept:	1	I have no idea what the fuck a Zurgenburger is supposed to be. Nor do I think there is any merit in writing about it.
Prose and formatting:	8	On the other hand, you have no difficulty with wiki-formatting, and you're spelling and grammar are both fine.
Images:	1	Your images add nothing to the article. Angry German Kid has nothing to do with Zurgenburger. A dog dressed as Yoda has nothing has nothing to do with Zurgenburger.
Miscellaneous:	10	You get a perfect ten in miscellany.
Final Score:	21	My suggestion: Kill this article, never look back, and try to write something funny instead. There are two links below the edit field that link to important resources for humor-challenged newbies, just above 'Save page' and 'Summary'. They are Beginner's Guide and How to be Funny and Not Just Stupid. You should read them and strictly abide by them the next time you write.
Reviewer:	Sir Groovester \| Contributions \| Talk Page 04:34, 5 April 2009 (UTC)

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