Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Zombie Americans
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Zombie Americans[edit source]
Lucyfer & his friend, Wlado! 23:54, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
| Humour: | 3 | It'd be helpful if you made the article less random. Don't forget to check the Beginner's Guide for more info. |
| Concept: | 1 | I really don't know why you'd want to write an article about zombie Americans....but I suppose that's just the way it is. |
| Prose and formatting: | 6 | This article's really slangy....I think it'd be better if you'd get to work on that. |
| Images: | 1 | There's only one image, and it doesn't really seem to have anything to do with the article.... |
| Miscellaneous: | 5 | Like I said, this article's pretty random....some randomness is OK but don't overdo it. |
| Final Score: | 16 | I think you need to work on this article more, no offense. Keep on working on it! |
| Reviewer: | Ilovecheeseandsausage | |