Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Unquotable:Quotes in AAAAA! (2nd opinion)
Unquotable:Quotes in AAAAA! [edit source]
Magic Snow man ☃ 22:43, December 13, 2010 (UTC)
Mine! PuppyOnTheRadio
| Humour: | 6 | It's an in-joke based upon an in-joke. That means while I like the idea of it, I'm also well entrenched in the Uncy camp, so as a result I can appreciate the humour, such as it were, but I don't see it having widespread appeal.
As it is there is only two jokes in there:
Of course, to add much more in here would distract from the thrust of the first joke, but I feel that each subheading needs a brief blurb with it. Something alongthe lines of AAAAAAA was very self deprecating at times, but almost overbearingly egocentric at others. While he would spread rumours about the immense size of his AAAAAAA, he was at other times disparaging of his AAAAAAA. Now I've just added another element to this that I think you should use in your article, as it will give you the opportunity to gather more laughs while keeping the intrinsic comedic value of AAAAAAA. If you hover over the second and third AAAAAAA in the article, then you'll have a pop-up giving you a translation of the AAAAAAA. This way you can actually add funny quotes in here, such as AAAAAAA! AAA'A AAAA AAAA AAAA, AAA'A AAAA AAAA AA AAA AAAAA. It's a little wiki-fu that looks like this |
| Concept: | 5 | AAAA, AAA AAA'AA AAAAAAA AA AAAAA AAAA, A'A AAAAA AA AAAA AAAAA. AAA A AAAAAAA AA AAAAAAA, AAAA A AAAA AA AAAA A AAAA AA AAAAAA. |
| Prose and formatting: | 4 | AAAA, AAAAA'A AAA AAAA AAAA AAA AAAAAA AA AAAAAAAAA. A AAAA, AAAAA AAA AAAA AA AAAA AAAA AAA AAA AAAAA that word. AAA AAAAA AAAA A AAAA AAA AA AAAA A AAAA AAA AAAAAAA AAAAAA AAA AAA AAA AAAA AAA AAA AAAAAAAA. AAA AAAAAAA AAA AA AA AAAA AAAAAAA AAAAAA AAAAAAAA AA AAAAAAA AA, AA AAAA AAAA AAAAAA AA AAAA AAAAA. |
| Images: | 3 | AAAA AAA AAAAA, AAA AAAA AAA AA AAA AAAA AAAAAAAAAA. AAAAA AAA AAA AAAA AA AAAAA AAAAAAA AAAA AAA AAA AAAAA AAAA AA? AAAAA AAA, AAAA AA AAAAAAAA AA AA AAAAAA AAAA AAAAAAA - AAAAA AA AAAAA AA AAAAAAAA AAAAA AAAAAAAAAAA? |
| Miscellaneous: | 5 | AAA AAA AAAAAA. |
| Final Score: | 23 | AAA AAAAAA AA AA-AAAAA AAAAAA, AAA AAAAA AAA AA'A AAA A AAAA AAAA AAAAAAA. |
| Reviewer: | PuppyOnTheRadio | |