Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/UnPoetia:Un-Odyssey
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UnPoetia:Un-Odyssey[edit source]
You'll only understand this if you've read The Odyssey.--Anakin 16:04, 29 January 2008 (UTC)
| Humour: | 7.9 | What a witty parody. If only high school epics could be that interesting. |
| Concept: | 6.8 | Pretty creative, but leaves you wanting more. |
| Prose and formatting: | 7.0 | As far as prose goes, it's pretty faithful to the original Homer, but I felt the ending was too abrupt. I think you could do better if either you expanded (which you obviously don't have time to do) or if you made the note at the end into a funny template. |
| Images: | 5.0 | No images makes this slightly dry. I recommend putting some sort of image to help it aesthetically. |
| Miscellaneous: | 7.0 | An arbitrary number to affect the tilt. |
| Final Score: | 33.7 | The humor is there, but it really leaves more to be desired. The ending is too abrupt and spoils the witty humor. As I said, either expand or use a template. For a good example of a very short featured article, you might want to see HowTo:Cut Your Own Head Off With a Chainsaw. Even a quote would do some good. |
| Reviewer: | Parsat, or, A Whole Bunch of Mischief 04:02, 6 February 2008 (UTC) | |