Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/UnNews:Joe Torre Found to have Rare Anti-Smile Disease
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UnNews:Joe Torre Found to have Rare Anti-Smile Disease[edit source]
Better than my first article but I'm still new and need some help. Leave me some suggestions.
| Humour: | 7 | It was pretty funny, could use a bit more cleverness, and more subtle references about how much the Yankees suck. |
| Concept: | 10 | Great concept. Torre does, in fact, have Anti Smile Disease |
| Prose and formatting: | 7 | The prose could use a bit of work. Make it flow a little more. I might clean it up a little myself. |
| Images: | 8 | Relevant for the most part, though I didn't really see the Homer Simpson connection. |
| Miscellaneous: | 7 | The Yankees suck. |
| Final Score: | 39 | So yes, could use a bit of a touch up, though not bad at all for a second article. I may add an audio to it when my voice gets back to normal. |
| Reviewer: | RAHB 23:41, 22 September 2007 (UTC) | |