Any feedback by you comedy masters/assholes?
Manosaurus 07:10, October 5, 2009 (UTC)
The title is twice as funny as the article.“He was a good man. Don't understand>"He could hug a moose’s balls straight into next Thursday. I ain’t NEVER seen a man alive with that type of moxie,” remarked Bill Chambers<Don't understand LOL> --Click meNO NOT ME!! I don't care if you click me 01:35, October 8, 2009 (UTC)
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5.3
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LOL>President Obama addressed the death of Mr. Tabernacle in an emotional late afternoon press conference on Capital Hill:“Look... now...I...hug. I hug all the time. They say it’s good for ya. Matter of fact, I love it. But now...here’s a guy that tried to create a sayin’ to help people. Here's what we're gonna do. A statue is goin' up. Maybe two. [tearing up] Maybe they're... mmm... ma... maybe they're hugging each other. [regains stoic presidential composure] And I'm thinkin' about starting a clothing line! Maybe calling it like, "Tab-Tab" or... "Hug Hug's" or somethin'. I don't know. Look.”<LOL Kinda sad>abernacle is survived by his grandmother and his favorite stuffed animal, a green lizard named Buddy.<Kinda sad
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5.3
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It was sad and funny at the same time.
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3.4
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Too short and alot of quotes needed to be on the top
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4.6
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The picture is a little bad that "hugs" isn't really on the t-shirt and there's only one.
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7.8
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Other than all that it was almost funny which is good for an article in unnews
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26.4
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Overall the article really need a back story, why did he die of hugs and how? By the way thank you for being my first pee reveiwee, I pee reviewed before ,but I accidentally reviewed the pee review discussion.
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--Click meNO NOT ME!! I don't care if you click me 19:30, October 8, 2009 (UTC)
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