Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/The Legend of Zelda: Ocarina of Time
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The Legend of Zelda: Ocarina of Time[edit source]
Would like some help in improving the article's humour. Thank you for taking the time to review. Wolf ODonnell 16:15, 22 August 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 8 | Loved the part where there's lots of trades... that convinced me. However, to get this to 10, you should intertwine the storyline with some other completely random thing, since the right amount of randomness can sometimes be funny. Consider novels or movies. |
| Concept: | 9 | A parody of a popular game provides a good concept. |
| Prose and formatting: | 8.5 | Yeah, formatting seemed pretty good... don't recall what prose is so I'm not giving score according to that |
| Images: | 6 | The image was good, but it's only one. I suggest adding more. |
| Miscellaneous: | 10 | Not Applicable. |
| Final Score: | 41.5 | A pretty good article. Might even get to be featured someday. |
| Reviewer: | --R. Daneel Olivaw (Gaia - Foundation) 23:39, 22 August 2007 (UTC) | |
Thank you, Mr. Olivaw. I require two more reviews from other people to ensure I get a good overview of what other people think of it. Thank you all in advance. Wolf ODonnell 09:37, 23 August 2007 (UTC)