Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/The Great Logic War
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The Great Logic War[edit source]
Quite possibly the WORST Uncyclopedia article ever, so I'm going to need some help refining it. Probably lots of typo in there, but I was rushing. I can't recall why...
Somecrazyguy 22:19, 13 June 2008 (UTC)
| Humour: | 5 | Most of this article is not very funny.It isn't complete nonsense-it makes sense of sorts, but it needs some much stronger jokes. I recommend you rewrite "Aftermath" and the introduction completely. |
| Concept: | 6 | I think it is quite good, although I think it needs to be made more of a parody of events in World War I if it is going to really suceed. There are lots of articles about wars between Wikipedia and Uncyclopedia however, so it would be preferable if it shifted its focus to something more original. |
| Prose and formatting: | 7 | Apart from the introduction being in the first person, and the rest of the article in the 3rd person, it's not bad, although there are a few typos. The text in the template needs to be rewritten. |
| Images: | 5 | Not terrible, but you could add a few more pictures which are slightly more interesting. The caption is pretty unnecessary |
| Miscellaneous: | 4 | You need some more links to other articles. |
| Final Score: | 27 | This article needs some work, but I don't think it is inherently flawed. |
| Reviewer: | Jlsmith 12:47, 14 June 2008 (UTC) | |