Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Shamwow (quick) (absorbant)
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Shamwow[edit source]
I know it isn't finished, but that's why I'm here. I just noticed that TERRIBLE Billy hayes article got the front page, and my product and spokesmen is much newer than Oxyclean. So the concept must be decent at least. I need approval for the bullshit I've already put in the article and would like someone else to add additional bullshit if they so see fit. Thx 71.111.202.179 18:02, 22 January 2009 (UTC)
| Humour: | 8 | There were quite a few good jokes, but some were a bit immature. |
| Concept: | 9 | I'm glad someone made an article about this- it's a great idea. |
| Prose and formatting: | 8 | Good writing, sentences are mostly good. SOme errors that I probably didn't notice. |
| Images: | 7 | Good pictures, but the Nazi one is too much. |
| Miscellaneous: | 8 | Needs a little less Nazi content, more biblical content. |
| Final Score: | 40 | Good article, needs to mature a bit. |
| Reviewer: | erock199 | |