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Roses[edit source]
I`m proud of this baby. What will the others say? Hmn? Zzz 
11:25, 12 May, 2011 (UTC)
Zzz 11:25, 12 May, 2011 (UTC) 11:25, May 12, 2011 (UTC)
| Humour: | 3 | I didn't really laugh at all during reading this. I think that's because a little too crazy and random. I think that if it had a little more of a plot to it, it would be funnier. I also think that you went too fast. I felt like I was riding a roller coaster while reading it. Maybe to make it more humorous, you could come up with one big story plot, like the wedding, and add little semi-random details, but ones that still make a little sense. I also think that you're trying too hard to be violent and funny, which just makes it dumb. |
| Concept: | 1 | There is absolutely no concept to this at all. It's just crazy sounding sentences mashed up into one crazy page. |
| Prose and formatting: | 2 | I don't even know. |
| Images: | 1 | A rose and very fake looking blood. Really? And that rose kinda looks like a tulip lol. |
| Miscellaneous: | 10 | Completely crazy! And this can be in a good way too, I just think that you over-did the crazy. |
| Final Score: | 17 | I think that this is a very hard article to write, especially because roses aren't that funny, but I like some of your ideas. |
| Reviewer: | 808 Ke808 | |