Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Pokemon Island
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Pokemon Island[edit source]
Hi, I haven't been getting much attention with this article, and I need a review to see what I can work on.As far as I see it, I'm running on creative multi-colored fumes.--Bad Shroom 21:33, 22 May 2009 (UTC) Please review!
Have no fear, I shall review--Iwillkillyou333 02:50, 25 May 2009 (UTC)
| Humour: | 7 | Had a good laugh with somethings. There are couple of problems though. First: The some of the paragraphs are too short and should be expanded. Second: lack of pictures. Other than that a good article |
| Concept: | 6 | The concept is good. I like it. but its kinda short. Try expanding it with more information. For example, you only have one sentence on the Silph Co. scetion. Try puing more detail in it |
| Prose and formatting: | 9 | Only a couple grammar mistakes, some things need to be spaced and Crosscountry should be Cross Country, but other han that very nice. |
| Images: | 2 | Unfortunately I only saw the one on the side that shows the map of Pokemon Island (and Hell). You should add more to spice up the article, make it look nicer and non boring. |
| Miscellaneous: | 6 | Average score of this review |
| Final Score: | 30 | I love this article. At first I hated bashing pokemon stuff like this because I was a huge fan at the time, but since I only play the games now, I find them quite funny. Anways, just follow the advise I gave you and peole will start paying more attention to this lovely article. If you have any questions, feel free to ask on my talk page. Good Luck! |
| Reviewer: | --Iwillkillyou333 03:29, 25 May 2009 (UTC) | |