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Playboy[edit source]
This article really sucked before, so I rewrote it. Now it only marginally sucks. I could use an opinion, so I can ignore it. Thanks! --THE 20:58, 13 February 2008 (UTC)
| Humour: | 8 | I chuckled silently to myself a few times. It's a very subtle, satirical humor, which is nice. I don't expect anyone to actually laugh at this one. |
| Concept: | 8 | "I only buy this magazine for the articles." I'm not sure if you were aiming for that joke, but it seems like it. Well done. I think it needs more jokes about how the philosophical issues involved are not appropriate for children under 18. |
| Prose and formatting: | 9 | Elegant, in a way similar to the prose in the magazine. |
| Images: | 6 | Needs more in this area. |
| Miscellaneous: | 7.8 | The images/text ratio is a little heavy on the text size. There should at least be an image at the top to open up the article. |
| Final Score: | 38.8 | Good concept, subtle humor, needs some work on the images. |
| Reviewer: |  Kaizer the Bjorn takkun  (nya nya) (1961 model!) Check out T61! 18:54, 17 February 2008 (UTC)
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