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Plastique surgery

Just a little something I whipped up. Not the best article ever, but I don't think it's bad. I know it needs to be expanded, and I would appreciate some ideas of how to do that. -- Aethix ~ Talk|Contributions|My project  23:45, 19 May 2009 (UTC)

Bump. -- Aethix ~ Talk|Contributions|My project  01:34, 24 May 2009 (UTC)

Humour:	5	Most of the article was rather confusing. The largest and most important part, History, was unclear and required me to read in multiple times. Once I finally got it, the joke just couldn't sink in. What you should do is perhaps come up with a less confusing History and completely redo the section. This would make much better. Also, you should lengthen the introduction and give us a bit more information about what the "plastique Surgery" really is and why we should know about it. THe types of surgery were not funny, I think you should come up with a few more, perhaps "lip enhancements: they put more POP in your kisses!" or something of the sort. The last part of the article was the best part, However, more work can still be done on that.
Concept:	6	It's a rough idea. To me, it seems sort of hard to work with, you just have to come up with something similar to plastic surgery, and you really have to make it funny. You have a sort of good idea with explosives, but I'm sure if you think you could come up with a better, more funny idea.
Prose and formatting:	7.5	There is nothing for me to say here except the fact that it was a little bit short. THat means you should come with some more content, and make sure it's creative!
Images:	6	The image is absoltuely perfect for the case, but the thing is, the image is taotally overused. You could make a picture or have someone make a picture for you with someone who has bombs as boobs or something else. Just try to be creative with it!
Miscellaneous:	6	See Below.
Final Score:	30.5	Overall, this article needs work. I suggest that you could perhaps change the idea of "plastique Surgery" in general, but if you keep the concept you must: Rethink and rewrite. Make in more clear and funnier. Find a new image. Make sure to be creative with it! Add content. Once up come with a good idea or rewrite it to make it clear, you should expand on some of the smaller ideas to make it longer and overall better. If you want to make this a good article, you've got a long quest ahead of you, but the reward is an excellent article under your belt, and potentially feature.
Reviewer:	Staircase CUNt 04:59, 26 May 2009 (UTC)