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Organic chemistry[edit source]
My first article. Just looking for ways to improve it, or things that suck that I missed.
Grayscale 03:18, 8 February 2008 (UTC)
| Humour: | 7 | It was pretty funny in some parts. It bogged down in the history section though. Nomenclature was pretty good |
| Concept: | 9 | It was original, but the failure concept played too large of a role. |
| Prose and formatting: | 7 | Too many ideas floating around. (You encased many of them.) Convert them into references, such as the one you have at the bottom. |
| Images: | 10 | It's enough |
| Miscellaneous: | 10 | Good length, right amount of links |
| Final Score: | 43 | Very good for a first attempt. You avoided many of the problems first time writers make, and it was funny in some areas. Use references to clean up idea spills, and take some out if they make the joke too obvious (such as 'getting confused yet?'), or if they don't add anything to the concept. |
| Reviewer: | Fresh Stain Serq Fet of Pokemon (At your service) 19:31, 12 February 2008 (UTC) | |