Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Next Year's Australian Grand Prix
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Next Year's Australian Grand Prix[edit source]
Basically Wacky Races. Much too long, I know, but if I'd missed anyone out someone would moan. Sog1970 15:16, November 28, 2009 (UTC)
| Humour: | 6.5 | I like this article. It just stops itself from being average, and leads itself up a couple of notches. I think it's pretty good in most places. I'm not sure if everyone would read it through to the end - but still good nonetheless |
| Concept: | 6 | Not quite tying your concept in with the rest of the article. But still, nice enough. |
| Prose and formatting: | 5.6 | I noticed a couple of spelling mistakes. Also, maybe consider breaking it up into more sections, and adding some sort of template to the side. A template with details. I'm not sure how to describe it: The one on the monty python article, but make it work for this one. |
| Images: | 5.1 | They were adequate for the most part. You get the .1 for the picture of the real car. |
| Miscellaneous: | 5.7 | So overall, this article is pretty good! But not, sometimes? I think the only real advice I can give is on the length, but I see no way of trimming it down. |
| Final Score: | 28.9 | This has been pee review. Good night. |
| Reviewer: | Reverse Genocide Cockatrices 03:34, December 5, 2009 (UTC) | |