Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Mortal Kombat
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Mortal Kombat[edit source]
This article has been sitting around for quite a while, and while I've made a few changes to improve it a bit, myself, I think this article could use some better love without a template begging for it. I figured the best way could be through pee review. After all, it's how the Street Fighter article got a major overhaul and improvement. Mortal Kombat certainly deserves a bit more love.
Where to start though? That's the question. I figure this will help out, so, feel free to tell what you think about the article, even if it's bad.Hanyouman 15:43, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
| Humour: | 5 | You seem to be trying too hard with the humor in this article, seeing though it's filled with all kinds of randomness. Some parts of the article were funny, some of them weren't. Obama? What does this article have to do with the current President of the United States? |
| Concept: | 7 | I believe that you went to work on that, at least....but like I said, this article is pretty random...there seems to be several different ideas....it still seems original though. |
| Prose and formatting: | 8 | This article is filled with typos....but I suppose that's just the style. It does have some red links though mainly due to its atypical writing style, perhaps you should remove those? |
| Images: | 7 | I don't have any particular suggestions for the images, but perhaps you should add more? It is a pretty big article. |
| Miscellaneous: | 10 | That's all I have to say. |
| Final Score: | 37 | This article's decent in my opinion, just keep up the good work! |
| Reviewer: | Ilovecheeseandsausage | |