Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Macintosh is Satan
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Macintosh is Satan[edit source]
G'orzak the Dubious 23:21, 25 June 2008 (UTC)
- I'm not sure how we can possibly review this. I mean, technically it's not a comedy article at all. As far as I can tell, it's dead serious. It's something stupid that a fundamentalist wrote, which has been cut-and-pasted onto Uncyclopedia so we can laugh at it. Am I wrong about any of that?
- So... what purpose would a review serve? Would we e-mail the fundie suggestions about how to make himself look even dumber? Or are you looking for advice on whether you should alter his article (beyond formatting, linkage, etc.)? Well... probably not, since that would kill the joke, which is "Whoa, look at this moron."
- Honestly, since this isn't really original work, I'm not sure it belongs on Uncyclopedia at all. This is the kind of thing that seems better suited for ED. Uncyclopedia is more about "hey, let me tell you a joke I just wrote," where ED is more like "lol look at these morons!!"
- Thoughts? --Hyperbole 16:46, 5 July 2008 (UTC)
| Humour: | 8 | Particularly like the logic chains at the start easing the reader into the "macs are evil" frame of mind |
| Concept: | 7 | Nice spin on this mac related news |
| Prose and formatting: | 4 | I can't help thinking that the length and writing style of this article would make it better as an unnews item |
| Images: | 3 | of the three images you've used only the first relates to the article. The other two seem a bit randomn (a platypus and a bunch of crosses ?). |
| Miscellaneous: | 5.5 | Took an average of the other scores |
| Final Score: | 27.5 | Overall a not bad article but as it is just now it should really be moved to unnews. |
| Reviewer: | --Jonjammin 17:05, 5 July 2008 (UTC) | |