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IF YOUR COMPUTER CANNOT DISPLAY JAPANESE CHARACTERS FOR ANY REASON, YOU MAY NOT UNDERSTAND THIS ARTICLE. Please leave a message on my talk page when you reviewed it. Captain Nerd 16:29, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

Humour:	4.8686	Introduction - Too short, needs expanding<333. Maybe define Kawaii Seizures <333? どのようにかわいい発作に <333 - What on earth does this paragraph mean? Maybe its supposed to have no meaning. But make it clearer at the section. The section seems very "Wikipedia-ish", its too factual, though it's not real. (Isn't it?) And it's not funny. Maybe you should exxagerate - change "simple" to "very simple". And you should add "<333". It makes the article look weird but then, if the article writer has a Kawaii Seizure, it would be nicer :D どのようにすれば、友達の言うことは、かわいい押収 <333 - I like this, especially the bad translation thingummywhut. Maybe a reference to the "dead" All your base are belong to us and the infamous Somebody set us up the bomb would be nice xP. このため、発作前に、あなたがかわいいとかわいいです実現することがここにはつじつまの合わないことひどい叫び日本フレーズ翻訳され、かわいい通知が表示されますの時間で <33333 - Take away the lol. And what do the words mean? これでは、キャラメル踊りながら死にたい平和ためには何人が、その代わりにすると、かわいい発作と、このテキストの道の真の手段は何もこれは素晴らしい、貯蓄を十分にするには、発作になるのかわいい実績の単純な無作為のしかし日本語に翻訳し、英語のように戻るミーン足らずで、このテキストを最初の場所で行った！ - Why are the section titles so long? And delete the section if there is no proper meaning. The content is too short, and not funny. It would be if you add "<333<333" in constant repitition.
Concept:	7	I always rate thsi highest :D. It has an expandable concept, and I like the Japanese words strewn all over. Makes the reader confused.
Prose and formatting:	6	Nope, it doesn't look ugly, except the last paragraph. The section is too big, the content is too little. And the content is diminuishing as the article gets longer. Don't know whether that's good or bad, but just expand it. Please.
Images:	3	One image - a big one aligned left in one paragraph. Did you know you can do [[File:Pikacaramell.gif|thumb|200px]] for the picture and [[File:Pikacaramell.gif|thumb|200px|''Insert caption here'']] for the caption? Or if you don't want that, you can do "<div align=center>[[File:Pikacaramell.gif]]</div> to align it at the center.
Miscellaneous:	5.2	Averaged.
Final Score:	26.0686	Borderline article, can be better. (P.S. I'm lenient)
Reviewer:	User:Zheliel/sigz2 08:13, 9 May 2009 (UTC)