Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/HowTo: Be the Fastest Runner in the World!!!
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Howto: Be the Fastest Runner in the World!!![edit source]
Man in the Ceiling 19:43, 8 August 2008 (UTC)
| Humour: | 9 | This has the potential to be a featured article, but just a little more humor could push you over the top. The title would discourage the Admins though, just capitilize it. |
| Concept: | 7 | The concept is a great one, but I'd add some more humor juice, and a little more organization to the article, giving it a more "I'm looking at something awsome" Feeling. |
| Prose and formatting: | 8 | The formatting is great, and you've got speeling and grammar down. Avoid the red links though, they'll get the article deleted in a second, unless the admin likes you, or just wants to rape you. |
| Images: | 9 | The images are top quality, but just for good measure, add a bit more images, and give them a sense of connection with the article. But for now, the images are fine. |
| Miscellaneous: | 7.8 | A few more images, some more formatting, and a little bit of drugs, this article has the potential to be featured! Oh, and capitalize the title. People like big words. |
| Final Score: | 40.8 | Good work, give it a little more though. |
| Reviewer: | --TheGreatLiquidFox 00:38, 9 August 2008 (UTC) | |