Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/HowTo:Get Featured revised
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HowTo:Get Featured[edit source]
I added a lot more PUTTY
23:17, December 2, 2010 (UTC)
| Humour: | 5 | You started well and there were certainly funny parts in it but some sections towards the end dragged it down a bit, you may wish to rewrite "The easy/hard way" and "Why wouldn't it get featured." May I suggest HTBFANJS. |
| Concept: | 8 | Concept was great but I don't think you pushed it quite enough. |
| Prose and formatting: | 5 | Once again it seemed to deteriorate towards the end with sentences missing words and the grammar failing. "blank the page like a arrogant 12 who thinks there funny will tell there friends to read" |
| Images: | 7 | Not much to say here, the plane is good as a "don't do this" image. |
| Miscellaneous: | 6 | Between the grammar and bedding/killing the admin's family it just didn't click with me. |
| Final Score: | 31 | I think you have a good idea going but it needs some work, maybe talk to an experience writer. |
| Reviewer: | Magdargi 00:59, December 5, 2010 (UTC) | |