Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/HowTo:Be annoying as hell on Xbox Live
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HowTo:Be annoying as hell on Xbox Live[edit source]
Uh, hey. This is my second article, it was reviewed once, I have made some changes and humbly request that it be re-reviwed. Many thanks in advance, and feedback is appreciated. *Negative or positive.
- Not really.TuoDecaps 13:48, 12 May 2008 (UTC)
I'm on this one (though have no fancy template to show it)! I'll have this review done within the hour. --Cheapinitreal 22:09, 22 May 2008 (UTC)
| Humour: | 7 | I like the humor used here. As a dedicated CoD4 player, I've heard countless kids be annoying on xbox live. The score got dragged down here becuase of format issues (lists are weak. You have a good base going. Just take each entry on your list and give some more description to illustrate your points and make paragraphs). I can tell I am going to like this article way better than the first reviewer did. I love the fact the narrator sees no reason in learning the readers name. |
| Concept: | 9 | It is great. Anyone who doesn't know how to annoy someone on xbox live will certainly find this helpful. |
| Prose and formatting: | 4 | The prose here is fairly sad given the concept. Luckily, this is a very easily corrected problem. |
| Images: | 3 | You can help punch up the humor in this article with one more good pic. If you request one from a more experienced user they will almost certainly help (I am not the one/not experienced/suck with photo shop programs). |
| Miscellaneous: | 6 | averaged or at least close to it |
| Final Score: | 29 | Don't give up on this article. It will take a lot of work but this could be a beautiful piece when done. If you'd like more specific help with this, feel free to drop by my discussion page and ask. I may have been a little bit more gracious than most seeing as how I despise most live players. |
| Reviewer: | --Cheapinitreal 22:26, 22 May 2008 (UTC) | |