Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Homestar
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Homestar[edit source]
Plscommitdie (talk) 01:22, 23 June 2021 (UTC)
| Humour: | 7 | It has that absurdist humor which works, but at the same time it borders closely on "words for the sake of there being words" type humor, which is less interesting as there's no flow to it. Also, I'll probably mention it later, but this is most definitely a stub article and needs that tag or template added! |
| Concept: | 8.7777771 | I'll be honest, I had no idea what it is referencing, but after doing the fastest and most lazy research I've ever done in my life consisting of binge watching some pirated episodes, I can confidently say that it still makes no sense in relation to the web series. But sometimes that's just the Uncyclopedia way, so a 8.7777771 is what it gets. |
| Prose and formatting: | 8 | first of all, congrats on no broken links!! WOOHOO! ok, back to regularly scheduled content: The grammar is good, and no spelling issues, but due to (see next section) its a whole lot of words and not much else. Makes reading very difficult due to our cripplingly short attention spans. Gonna need some more category links too, you can do that by enabling HotCat in preferences (the easiest way!). |
| Images: | 5.5 | ok, turns out there IS one single image, but due to it being a black and white and graph, it hardly counts. OTHERWISE, the rest of the article is in desperate need of images. The Homestar Runner show revolves around easy to draw creatures, whereas this article seems to depict the show (or the characters) as masses in a planetary system. Easy opportunities for easy potatochops here if you want to make them look like planets using the inflate tool, or having them floating in space... endless possibilities. |
| Miscellaneous: | 7.3 | - aggregated score from above - |
| Final Score: | 36.5777771 | needs more content! it's still an unregistered stub offender! BUT i also like where its going, HUGE opportunities for photo edits, and some categories about (example: exploration, recorded wars, formation, etc). |
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