Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Edward the blue engine (quick)
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Edward the blue engine [edit source]
I really want to know how I can improve this article, to stop it from going the same way as two of my other articles, and dying young. I am only an unadopted n00b, though. Pity me.
JeNkIn (lol cheese) 13:09, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
| Humour: | 3 | Not very funny. Does anyone really watch this show anymore? To make it funnier, make the jokes more universally appealing, not just funny to people who watch this show. |
| Concept: | 5 | The idea of creating a crossover between the Harry Potter universe and the Thomas The Tank Engine universe (they're both in England) is novel. However it's badly executed and lacks focus. |
| Prose and formatting: | 2 | The writing is extremely inconsistent, and not it a funny way. It just looks like you're jumping from one idea to another with no apparent focus at all. Randomness can be funny, but this is not funny-random. It's stupid-random. |
| Images: | 2 | There's only one image, and it's a shitty one. Go get better quality images. |
| Miscellaneous: | 5 | To your credit, the topic is esoteric and has potential for greatness. It's just strange enough to become surreal humor. Spend more time on it too. |
| Final Score: | 17 | Spend more time writing this article. Look at featured articles and see what they did to be considered funny. |
| Reviewer: | W.T. Door 14:19, 5 September 2008 (UTC) | |