Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Do a Barrel Roll
Do a Barrel Roll[edit source]
Hey, everyone. This is my first first articly here so woo!! Just like to thank everyone that took there time to review my crappy ,what I think is bad, article. I had alot of problems with the pictures. I just didn't get how I was supposed to add them. I had a bunch of pics on my computer that I had choosen for this article. I tried changing the file of the pics to...jpg? I'm not entirely sure if that's it...but everytime I tried to add an image with that- something....image <insert image here.jpg> or ..something like that, when I inserted the file name and saved it, the image<blabla> thing showed up in my article but red. I have also been on this other screen where it talks about submiting an image. I have tried that too but and error occures that says the the image is corrupt. Most of the images that I obtained are from (of course) google. Does the error occure because I didn't insert the right license (first of what is a license?? Is it like the copyright and to whom the image belongs too?)? I simply put for the license "Found the image somewhere". Hope someone can help me with this problem. Other than that, I had alot of fun making the article. I tried making it as funny as I could but part of my "funny" part is the images so...back to that old problem again. Thanks again for reviewing my article!!!
p.s. Sorry I'm suck a noobie <(>.<)>
Johnrofl123 02:52, 12 March 2009 (UTC)
| Humour: | 6.24 | Quotes: Not bad, I like the Chuck Norris Joke. But I don't think you should add two !s at the back of every quote. It makes the quotes seem boring and monotonous. Content - Intro: Very funny, except maybe you shouldn't put all caps when you cancel. Maybe change 3500 calories to something more to annoy and humor the reader. Other content: Maybe you can add more types of barrels? Maybe something in parody of George Bush? Or of the reader using {{USERNAME}} or [[Special:MyPage]]. These are fun. And for the third section (about how to do a barrel roll), you should exaggerate on the 'a lot'. To make it seem nicer. And read this article for good tips like repitition. I can't clump it all into here...Examples: You can use ===INSERT NAME HERE=== below ==INSERT NAME HERE==. It's unneccesary to use ---- for a line.
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| Concept: | 7 | Great page, interesting concept, great idea. Oh, and great page too. Love the interesting concept. Did I include that the idea was great? |
| Prose and formatting: | 6.84 | Notes: Maybe you should put the "notes" into the talk page here. Section:Barrel Roll: I think you should incoporate this into the header of the article. Which means, don't include it in any section but just include it at the top of the article below templates (if there are any). Links: You know, you can include links in your article. Sig: Oh, and you're not supposed to put your sig at the bottom. Maybe at the talk page? |
| Images: | 2.14159 | I don't want to fail anybody... Although there were no pictures, you said there would be pictures, and I believe you. For the license thing, you can select "Found the image Somewhere" from the drop-down menu. For the summary, just talk about the picture, and its description. For the destination filename you can use "File:PICTURE NAME.jpg" for a picture, and .gif for animation.
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| Miscellaneous: | 5.5553975 | I used a calculator for this (average) . My counting... |
| Final Score: | 27.7769875 | Hey, I'm noob too. But I joined 2 weeks ago ;) You should get adopted in the Adopt-a-noob program. |
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