Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Did you ever lock horns with a goat?
Did you ever lock horns with a goat?[edit source]
This is one I just thought could rest here and not be seen by human eyes (or so I thought until YOU showed up!), pass it's seven-day sentence, and then I could keep it in backlog to self-nom sometime, probably in January as I'd like to get that Festivus page on VFH first, then Uncy is almost full because who knows how long Murdoch is going to live and if he died that would shoot that page all to hell, in fact that should probably get somewhere right after Christmas fades into the night. But this one, ha, this was pure fun writing it on Illogicopedia, and finding the perfect goat picture there. I may play with it more, but not too much, so please have a cookie, maybe comment on the page if you'd like, point out any massive holes that you think should be filled, but by and by this is just sitting here, like a guy checking the birthdate of that very hot and very loose woman he met and counting off the days until she, in this case it, becomes legal. Aleister 00:50 13 12
I'll do it. --Magic Snow man ☃ 04:01, December 17, 2010 (UTC)
| Humour: | 8 | Oh gods I like this! Illogical enough to qualify as nonsense, but makes just enough sense to actually be funny. There isn't much I can find wrong with this. So anyway, let's get right to business: This really segmant of one of the sentances really got me: "those HOOVES click-click-clacking on the tile floor of this place I had wandered into". I know it says you don't know what that place was, but maybe there is somethig about this place you remember? Something significant about this place? Just thought it was weird. Maybe what you say about the place could be really vague or something... Or maybe you can remember the insignificant really well, and the stuff that would be really important not so well (seeing as you did almost bleed to death on that day)? I don't know...
Also, you say "I have no idea, not to this very day.", but then you go back to "Dozens of them." without any thing in between. That just seemed weird to me. Nothing else on humor really. That's it for here. |
| Concept: | 7 | Ah yes the consept! I think this is one of the best consepts ever! A man telling the tale of the day he lived for real. Perfect! In my opinion it's a similar consept to the my sojourn articles. |
| Prose and formatting: | 9 | I gave this a nine because I'm really bad at gramor and speeling myself. And the formating and stuff looked fine. But did see one thing: You said "with my brain leaking onto the horns of that creature yet I still held my own for a MINUTE." But what I think you ment was "with my brain leaking onto the horns of that creature, yet I still held my own for a MINUTE." Or "with my brain leaking onto the horns of that creature. Yet I still held my own for a MINUTE." |
| Images: | 10 | Well, there is only one, but... THAT'S A GREAT FUCKING GOAT PICTURE! So... Ya... |
| Miscellaneous: | 10 | Let me see under your hairflap again. |
| Final Score: | 44 | So really this is a great article. And even a feature with minimal work. So... Um... Great job I guess. That's all for this one. Case closed.
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