Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Declaration of war on Iraq
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Declaration of war on Iraq[edit source]
| Humour: | 2 | HTBFANJS advises that it's a bad idea to directly state your political beliefs (or the exact opposite of them). This isn't very funny, although the "Texan" expressions are sort of amusing. It just comes off as bitter. |
| Concept: | 5 | The concept's OK, I guess, although all the points you make with this direct approach have already been raised. Try to be more subtle. You could, for example, weave hints at the ways the war was mismanaged into legal or other flowery language. |
| Prose and formatting: | 6 | Generally adequate. |
| Images: | 6 | Appropriate, but could be better. |
| Miscellaneous: | 4 | |
| Final Score: | 23 | |
| Reviewer: |  Alksub - VFH CM WA RV {talk} 22:33, 16 May 2007 (UTC)
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--17:42, 16 May 2007 (UTC)