Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Craig David
Craig David[edit source]
Captaingoodtimelove 14:17, 6 March 2009 (UTC)
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Projectmayhem666-has stamped this article for review. |
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I hate Craig David, I hope this makes me proud. --—The preceding signed comment was added by Projectmayhem666 (talk • contribs). 16:47, 6 March 2009 (UTC)
| Humour: | 8 | I like the quotes, already I can see you're going to be going for the Bo Selecta route, probably the best way to go.
The intro is ok, its funny but its a bit irrelevent so I'm going to have to average this, the joke is good it just doesn't fit the rest of the article, thats just my opinion though. First section is very good, works really well, it fits in with the article perfectly and is exactly what I'd expect, no mistakes that I can see here at all, well written. Second section, you need to reword the opening line but I'll add that to P&F. There are some grammar errors but its still pretty funny and good. Third section is also good, one mistake however, being producers not produces. forth section is ace, the sailor moon reference at the end is pure genius. The fanny face nickname needs changing in stay in line with the theme you've got going on though. Last section could be longer, however, its very funny and good great article. |
| Concept: | 9 | Great idea and superb implementation, what could be funnier than a craaaaig daaavid article, maybe a craaaaig daaavid / daniel beddingfield duo article, I like it you've done well here. |
| Prose and formatting: | 7 | Not many mistakes but there are some I'll list them here.
"After his smash hit 'Fill Me In', Craig or 'Captain ModestC' to record company execs" in the second section, should have "was signed to" somewhere there. "while shaving his immpecable goatee and was " Impecable has 1 m. It flows well so pretty good. |
| Images: | 5 | Only one image, add another one and you're on your way to VFH. The image you have is good though hence the 5/5 but it still needs a second. |
| Miscellaneous: | 7 | Averaged by magic |
| Final Score: | 36 | Add content to last section, add an image and proof read, then let me know and I'll nominate this for you. Not sure how it will do because Americans have no idea who he is, but its funny nonetheless. |
| Reviewer: | --—The preceding signed comment was added by Projectmayhem666 (talk • contribs). 15:26, 12 March 2009 (UTC) | |