Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Barbells
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Barbells[edit source]
Review this or I shall smite thee with a barbed bell. --Oh Nut.
23:36, 9 September 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 5 | Funny but not very. Has no real funny concept, just random stuff happening. |
| Concept: | 5 | Only one real joke, the rest is just random stupid stuff. |
| Prose and formatting: | 2 | Appalling formatting, reads like a badly written story. Look at a wiki article to see how to format. |
| Images: | 7 | The image of the bell was good, needs more though. |
| Miscellaneous: | 3 | The last bit was just random. |
| Final Score: | 22 | Not particularly funny or clever, needs alot of work. |
| Reviewer: | Moneke | |