UnNews talk:Slow news day results in bizarre death

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UnNews:Slow news day results in bizarre death This one's my first actual article of any kind, but still, give it your worst! --Starnestommy (TalkContribsFFSWP) 01:39, 6 June 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 7 The humour was alright. I think you could have told some history about the town and the paper. The quotes were good. You managed to make it sound like a real small newspaper-article.
Concept: 7 Yeah the concept was good, this is UnNews so naturally it's written like news. Good job.
Prose and formatting: 7 I didn't notice any spelling errors, you could have added some links to the article, though.
Images: 7 An image would have been nice.
Miscellaneous: 7
Final Score: 35 You could still work on it a bit, so I give it 7 out of 10.
Reviewer: Finntastic 10:18, 6 June 2007 (UTC)