UnNews talk:Hugh Laurie Suffers Injury, Contracts Foreign Accent Syndrome
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Uh, guys, this makes no sense cuz it talks about foreign accents, but he talks with an American one, and American's aren't foreigners, foreign people are! Duh. -- 
20:00, 3 June 2007 (UTC)
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UnNews:Hugh Laurie Suffers Injury, Contracts Foreign Accent Syndrome[edit source]
Another article to review. --Mr.Vib 12:59, 26 May 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 6.5 | There isn't a whole lot of just funny parts in the article. Though I don't think it needs that, it still sounds great and overall the article is funny. |
| Concept: | 6.5 | It's a pretty good play off of him using a great American accent during House M.D. Though there is an inconsistency with the article and the first photo. The photo says a blood vessel pops out of his head, and it doesn't say that in the article. |
| Prose and formatting: | 7 | Well the prose and formatting is good, but who said this quote:"Needless to say, this further confuses an already confusing situation." It doesn't give a source in the article. Also you should implement the sentence "Laurie isn't the only one completely astounded by this incident." into the paragraph below it somehow. This sounds very professional though. |
| Images: | 7.5 | Not too great of images, but they do work to make the article better. |
| Miscellaneous: | 9 | Make up some random funny name that has to do with the article in someway for the fan in paragraph ten. |
| Final Score: | 36.5 | Great article overall! |
| Reviewer: | -Scout JoshHJ's Page and His Talk 23:49, 2 June 2007 (UTC) | |