UnBooks talk:Encyclopedia of Machete Battles

link	score /50	user	lowest score	date	comment
Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/UnBooks:Encyclopedia of Machete Battles	27	Serq Fet	concept: 3	10/3	Add some hilarious machete battles. Sounds easy, right? Also, he put the concept grade in the miscellaneous. Very specific suggestions, so I'd like another opinion.
Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/UnBooks:Encyclopedia of Machete Battles	41.4	GerryCheevers	humor/concept: 7	10/15
avg = 34.2 lowest = 5

Humour:	4	Some good parts
Concept:	3	This book seems to be about a history of machete battles. Might I recomend having some accounts of Machete battles? And the Vietnam Vet seems a little too over the top. Don't capitalize so many things
Prose and formatting:	6	Capitilizations out of place.
Images:	6	Sufficiant. I think you should take out the pillows and the gnome. The alternating rabbit/monkey ones are good, although maybe you should keep them as seperate images
Miscellaneous:	8	Good concept
Final Score:	27	Keep: Intro, History, part of 'best places,' conclusion Delete: What's it like, part of 'best places,' make the 'Vet' parts have less drama Add: History of battles It's a good idea, but it has some work to do. It was pretty good in some parts, but it does need some clean-up.
Reviewer:	Fresh Stain Serq Fet of Pokemon (At your service) 05:10, 3 October 2007 (UTC)