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| Humour:
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7
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I Chuckled a bit while reading this.
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| Concept:
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6
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Original concept, but there were only two really jokes: Funny names and a horny bad guy.
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| Prose and formatting:
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6
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As with many of your articles, the grammar and syntax can sometimes be worded a bit strangely. I fixed a few really problematic ones. But this is one of the most coherent I have read of your articles, so you're obviously improving! Just be careful not to overstate a point (comedy or otherwise) using too many sentences. - Often it can be done in a single sentence.
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| Images:
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8
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Nothing too wrong with the images - though I didn't think the "promotional poster" looked much like a promotional poster.
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| Miscellaneous:
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6.8
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I didn't mind this as an overall, but I didn't find it amazing.
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| Final Score:
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33.8
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Is this based on a real movie? If so, might be worth linking to the original. To be honest, it sounded like a plot of a movie that might actually exist. But I enjoyed it
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| Reviewer:
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Strainj1 00:51, 9 March 2013 (UTC)
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