Talk:Road trip

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My second article, and I think it's better than my first one. My only problem is that it's too short. --Jedravent 00:33, 16 December 2006 (UTC)

Lawl! I like it. A lot better than any of my first articles. My only recommendation would be expansion (like you said). Give analogies, elaborate, use sentence fragments, lie, cheat, steal, rape, do whatever it takes to make your article longer. Welcome to Uncyclopedia; it's a rough life. --EMC ^[TALK] 05:17, 16 December 2006 (UTC)

I added some more info, but I'm afraid that it's still too short. --Jedravent 20:29, 19 December 2006 (UTC)

I added even more info, and I think that it's okay now. --Jedravent 00:02, 21 December 2006 (UTC)

Thanks!--Jedravent