Talk:One Rifle Per Child

I'm not sure how much more could be added to this without it stretching funny into not-funny. But if you have any good ideas please feel free to whang them in. --Bonjo Nelson 22:49, 21 December 2006 (UTC)

From Pee Review

Um. It's a bit short at the moment, but with some TLC I think it could make a half-reasonable article. --Bonjo Nelson 11:26, 22 December 2006 (UTC)

Fly off on an unlikely tangent. Explain for instance how inexpensive rifles have helped push back poverty amongst the target group. How it has enriched their lives, and how children around the world have profited due to enhanced employability by the sole fact that they owned a rifle. How the use of said rifles wielded by children is contributing greatly to the revitalization of communities that up until now have been held back by obsolete and ineffective business practices. Or, if you are into Socialism: sing the virtue of a child's assault rifle as "the great equalizer". And if the above comment strikes you as a bit out of kilter and perhaps downright cynical, well, that might just be by design... -- di Mario 21:29, 23 December 2006 (UTC)

Thanks - all very good ideas - I'll have to do some more work. --81.178.250.25 22:11, 23 December 2006 (UTC)

It's all right. It's got context, all you need is to expand it some more. Take it in a new direction. And I also reccomend strongly to drop the first picture. If you read the whole article it isn't that bad but when you click on it and it just jumps out at you, it's creepy. ~ Unflameviper ^{Who's a Peach?} 20:56, 18 January 2007 (UTC)