Talk:John Adams

This article is undergoing a MAJOR REWRITE. Suggest and develop ideas here, questionable ideas presented in the article itself will be deleted on sight as an attempt at retaining quality. --BlueSock 01:03, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

ideas

i'm thinking:

• john adams has a major inferiority complex about being the second president instead of the first. we can include subtle burns on george washington (that wooden-toothed pansy)
• otherwise, pretty encyclopedic and sticking close to his actual life, using his wikipedia page as a basis. SirGerrycheeversGunTalk 23:24, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, I like that as a start. I'll let you start on this, and I'll flesh it out and add whatever I can. --BlueSock 23:27, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

okay, sounds good. i've got about twenty minutes, so i'll write an intro and we can go from there. SirGerrycheeversGunTalk 23:35, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

Okay. Thanks for the addition of an image. --BlueSock 23:41, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

alright, i've added the intro. it needs some revisiting, but i think i've captured the general tone and direction i think the article should take. what do you think? SirGerrycheeversGunTalk 23:51, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

I think it's a good start. I've gotta finish some work, but when I get back I'll polish some phrasing up a little then start to add from there.--BlueSock 00:06, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

cool. i probably won't be around to work on it much until tomorrow. SirGerrycheeversGunTalk 00:08, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

Same, I'll probably only have time for some slight changes.--BlueSock 00:26, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

Changed my mind on polishing your intro. It looks fine. I added a sentence and changed the caption for a picture. I'm pretty awful at captions, so change if needed. I'm going to go read over the Wikipedia articles and brainstorm. Bluesock out --BlueSock 00:56, November 4, 2009 (UTC)