User talk:Snake7/Drive-thru

This could be good. However, I have three things to tell you.

1. I have three things to tell you.
2. Try writing this in paragraph form, as just a monologue.
3. Try breaking up the text some. Images work for that.

I'm interested in this. Let me know if you want some help with this. Good luck. —Sir SysRq (talk) 01:52, 11 February 2009 (UTC)

I disagree with point two. The whole of the article is the back-and-forth between the car dude and the speaker dude. Having a monologue would eliminate one of the two from the conversation, requiring awkward "Did he really just say ___________?" moments to show what the other dude said. I think you should keep the format and make it an UnScript when you move it to mainspace. Unsolicited conversation Extravagant beauty PEEING 01:59, 11 February 2009 (UTC)

My only issue with that is that then it looks like a big wall of single lines. I understand the concept here, I just think it would be better to find a more creative way of going about this. And I like this just as it is, without being an UnScript. This way, when people look up "Drive-Thru" they get this funny dialogue instead of having to search for "UnScripts:A Rather Unpleasant Visit To The Local Drive Thru". —Sir SysRq (talk) 02:05, 11 February 2009 (UTC)

Yea, I suppose that does make sense, though I still oppose changing it to a monologue specifically. On an unrelated point, do you think he has any idea we're here, tlkn n his tlk pg? Unsolicited conversation Extravagant beauty PEEING 02:20, 11 February 2009 (UTC)

I GOTS AN IDEA! He could link drivethru to his unscript. Im so clever. ~SirTagstit • VFH • NotM • PEEING • CPT • RotM • BFF 23:45, 11 February 2009 (UTC)

Thanks for you suggestions. I might or might not move it to UnSripts when its finish. Making it a monologue really wouldn’t work for this. I'll add pictures when the text is finished.--Snake7 21:54, 12 February 2009 (UTC)