User talk:Loathing/Sexual Abstinence

i fear i may be somewhat overloading that page of yours with useless (or not so much) shit, so it seems only right and proper i should use this one to talk about its very own...personal...article. yeah. --Loathing 16:23, 19 September 2007 (UTC)

No worries, my talk page is open season for whatever, it just hasn't been archived in a while. Anyway, I think the thing that is getting a little bit overdone are your newer editions to this article. Not to say that they aren't good, they just don't fit here as well. Because if I recall, the book Catcher in the Rye begins and ends in the same perspective. In other words, it should start and end with you talking to the doctor, rather than doing the author's explanations. I'd consider taking that space and adding some other tangential sections, because they're damn funny. It is one of those instances where I don't even want to try to duplicate it and make the edits myself because I don't think I could do it as well. Or maybe I'm lazy. I think its the former though.

Anyway, you could revert the more author-related edits and fill in separately if you care too. If you'd rather leave it that is also your decision. Let me know when you choose and I'll move forward with my edits, clean it up, etc. Also, I might have asked before, but what is your native language? You're good with this English stuff; I didn't know until you mentioned it. --THINKER 20:08, 28 September 2007 (UTC)

tell you the truth, i didn't think the introduction thing was going down well either, but as you didn't mention anything about it, it ocurred to me that maybe i should revamp the fucking thing and see if it's any good. I'm not even sure that this, being a book, even needs an introduction, aside, that is, from yours. I'm brazilian, native language' portuguese. I just read lots of books, I suppose. And english is a far better language for humor. And for bullshit and rage, come to think of it. Still, who cares ? I don't. You don't. Nobody cares. --Loathing 20:17, 28 September 2007 (UTC)

Well yeah, the introduction can also go; I made it the "second edition" to give myself that bit of floorspace, as I am one to do (being an asshole and all). But feel free to delete it 100%. You are the master and commander; I am but the mentor. Lemme know when you change it and if you want me to look it over when you've made progress. --THINKER 20:27, 28 September 2007 (UTC)

Sure thing, boss. Guess i'll have to reread that goddamn book now. Still, you should never waste an opportunity to improve yourself. And fill those sparkling crazy neurons with profanity. Yeah, well, be in touch. Not any kind of touch, o' course. The gentle kind.--Loathing 20:30, 28 September 2007 (UTC)

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This would work well as an UnBook - its worth thinking about:)--Sycamore (Talk) 19:01, 19 February 2009 (UTC)