User talk:Ljlego/John Madden
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This is a rewrite of the John Madden article that I am proposing when it is done because the current one sucks. I'm strapped for ideas, however, and would like some input. Cheerio.--Sir Ljlego, GUN VFH FIYC WotM SG WHotM PWotM AotM EGAEDM ANotM + (Talk) 00:08, 24 April 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 7 | Pretty funny due to prose. |
| Concept: | 8 | Good idea! I completely forgot about the incident in the last paragraph. |
| Prose and formatting: | 9 | Best part, as obviously it sounds like John Madden. |
| Images: | 6 | Could use more, better. |
| Miscellaneous: | 7 | |
| Final Score: | 37 | Sorry I didn't get to this earlier, somehow I missed that comment on the earlier review. Anyway, as far as the overall article goes its in good shape atm, however I would imagine it could be longer and the easiest addition you could make is more / better pictures. Ideas on new sections would be on Madden's clear fondness for pure animal lard or something funny about the mediocrity of the games with his name stamped on them. Good luck to you! |
| Reviewer: | – Preceding unsigned comment added by Leatherboundbooks (talk • contribs) | |