User:Frosty/NOWC/judging/WeinribŽivojinović

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House of Hangover[edit | edit source]

Humour - Score: 6/10 Comment: It's funny, but I feel like it'd be better if I knew the character.
Concept - Score: 4/10 Comment: The concept on its own is really boring.
Originality - Score: 10/10 Comment: Not gonna lie, it's pretty original.
Formatting - Score: 8/10 Comment: Not bad, could use some adjusting. Might make it a little more appealing to the eye.
Images - Score: 7/10 Comment: It has its own gallery, which is nice, but they could be funnier.
Total - Score: 35/50 Comment: If you're curious, that's a 70. Eh.

UnNews:Leprechauns support Obama[edit | edit source]

Humour - Score: 7/10 Comment: Funny, but a bit inconsistent.
Concept - Score: 8/10 Comment: It definitely caught my eye.
Originality - Score: 8/10 Comment: It follows a trend of political articles, but it's unique in that category.
Formatting - Score: 9/10 Comment: Pretty standard formatting for an UnNews article. Nothing wrong here.
Images - Score: 8/10 Comment: Not enough images, but the one image did make me giggle.
Total - Score: 40/50 Comment: Good job. I'm looking forward to your future contributions.

The Hawaiian conquest of Wales[edit | edit source]

Humour - Score: 9/10 Comment: This was a good one. I laughed a lot.
Concept - Score: 4/10 Comment: Weird choice. Not a lot of relevance. You made it work, though.
Originality - Score: 10/10 Comment: I have never seen anything like this on Uncyc, honestly.
Formatting - Score: 5/10 Comment: Bad formatting. Bad bad bad.
Images - Score: 10/10 Comment: I'm sorry, but even if there were few images, the warrior one made my sides hurt.
Total - Score: 38/50 Comment: It was funny as poop jokes to a 5 year old, but the formatting was baaaaaad.

Cthulhu Tequila[edit | edit source]

Humour - Score: 8/10 Comment: Not too shabby.
Concept - Score: 1/10 Comment: The only way to come up with this is if you're high or mentally disturbed.
Originality - Score: 10/10 Comment: If I could put this at 20, I would. This article is OUT THERE.
Formatting - Score: 10/10 Comment: No problems here.
Images - Score: 8/10 Comment: A bit of work done here. I also appreciate the eye candy, but that's not contribution to the humour.
Total - Score: 37/50 Comment: It's meh.

Giovanni Battista Bugatti[edit | edit source]

Humour - Score: 3/10 Comment: One of those ones that would be better with the context.
Concept - Score: 4/10 Comment: It's something I'd skip over in a list.
Originality - Score: 4/10 Comment: Historical figures, seen it before.
Formatting - Score: 10/10 Comment: This is your saving grace. Everything else needs a LOT of work.
Images - Score: 5/10 Comment: Maybe funny, with more context.
Total - Score: 26/50 Comment: Not good. Sorry.

UnPoetia:Ode to Cthulhu[edit | edit source]

Humour - Score: 8/10 Comment: It's hard for poetry to impress me, but you succeeded.
Concept - Score: 7/10 Comment: There's a lot of Cthulhu articles, but I've never seen poetry before.
Originality - Score: 9/10 Comment: What monstrosity has your brain created!?
Formatting - Score: 10/10 Comment: It's a poem, so not a whole lot to be seen here.
Images - Score: 8/10 Comment: There's only one, but it's a poem. I wouldn't expect there to be a whole gallery or something.
Total - Score: 42/50 Comment: You did good, but this is honestly harder to judge than an article because there's less content.

UnNews:Amy Winehouse is Alive and Kicking[edit | edit source]

Humour - Score: 8/10 Comment: Pretty good.
Concept - Score: 9/10 Comment: Not bad.
Originality - Score: 9/10 Comment: Pretty original.
Formatting - Score: 9/10 Comment: Standard UnNews formatting, nothing out of place here
Images - Score: 9/10 Comment: Funny, but bad. It kinda fits though.
Total - Score: 44/50 Comment: Quality work, bud.

HowTo:Join The Internet Wrestling Community[edit | edit source]

Humour - Score: 9/10 Comment: The humour was here, and it was queer.
Concept - Score: 7/10 Comment: Weird, but it does go somewhere.
Originality - Score: 9/10 Comment: Blah Blah Blah
Formatting - Score: 8/10 Comment: Blah Blah Blah
Images - Score: 0/10 Comment: You had none. NONE. This...was a drawback.
Total - Score: 33/50 Comment: Lack of images brought you down a lot.

Frank Bush[edit | edit source]

Humour - Score: 2/10 Comment: It really wasn't that funny. Sorry.
Concept - Score: 1/10 Comment: It's like, you're combining two people that aren't even similar. It doesn't work.
Originality - Score: 5/10 Comment: It's weird. I dunno about original though.
Formatting - Score: 8/10 Comment: Formatting wasn't bad.
Images - Score: 6/10 Comment: At least you had pictures.
Total - Score: 22/50 Comment: I hate being harsh, but I have to, as a judge. Don't give up though, keep trying.

UnNews:Lance Armstrong: My Moped Shame[edit | edit source]

Humour - Score: 7/10 Comment: Not incredibly funny, but it's still good.
Concept - Score: 6/10 Comment: The idea is bland, but the possibilities are endless.
Originality - Score: 8/10 Comment: I guess if you like bike races...
Formatting - Score: 8/10 Comment: Standard UnNews formatting.
Images - Score: 7/10 Comment: Image was a little funny.
Total - Score: 36/50 Comment: Could use some work, but not horrible.

UnNews:Baumgartner skydive 'was bachelor party prank'[edit | edit source]

Humour - Score: 8/10 Comment: Pretty funny.
Concept - Score: 6/10 Comment: I probably wouldn't have read it if I saw it in a list
Originality - Score: 8/10 Comment: Current event, but still original.
Formatting - Score: 10/10 Comment: Nothing wrong here, handled the images well.
Images - Score: 8/10 Comment: Not bad.
Total - Score: 40/50 Comment: