Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/ UnNews:Judge Sues Over Lost Toothpaste Cap
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UnNews:Judge Sues Over Lost Toothpaste Cap [edit source]
| Humour: | 6 | You know, for a short article, this was actually pretty decent. |
| Concept: | 8 | An altogether humorous concept. Who's Pearson, though? Maybe I'm just a bigot. |
| Prose and formatting: | 5 | Not bad, not good. Very newslike and informative, although it is very short. |
| Images: | 6 | Like the caption, but the article is too short to add more than one pic. |
| Miscellaneous: | 10 | Not applicable. You can stop partying now. |
| Final Score: | 35 | I think that you could go pretty far with this article, all you have to do is put some more into it. If you could come up with some sort of controversy or huge explosion or something, writing would flow fairly easily. |
| Reviewer: | • • • Necropaxx (T) {~} 22:41, 15 June 2007 (UTC) | |