Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Worst 100 Locations of All Time
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Worst 100 Locations of All Time[edit source]
Iamhungey 00:28, 4 March 2008 (UTC)
| Humour: | 4 | It starts off alright, there are some good lines in the first ten. But, like all Uncyc lists do, it degenerates into a vast mist of randomness. Quickly. It needs some attention-grabbers in each section to catch the reader's attention, make them laugh, and most importantly, make them want to read on. I would also get rid of the end bit, as lists need a climactic end, not an anti-climax like it has currently (minus numbers are a sure-fire turn off). A better, more appealing/shocking number one would be ideal, although I can't think of one right now (it's hard for lists). |
| Concept: | 3 | Another Worst 100 list. It's a nice expansion...but we've just seen so many of these go down the pan that they are almost cliché at this point. It's not all that bad a list concept though. Maybe it could be worked into a normal article? I don't know. |
| Prose and formatting: | 5 | It's a list, so I really can't rate this that highly (what with the lack of prose and whatnot). The formatting of the list, however, is very good. Pro tip: Reduce the image sizes a bit, as it makes the article appear cluttered. Spelling and grammar are decent, however, "Jew" needs capitalisation, as does "Christian". |
| Images: | 6 | These, while not outright funny, are quite descriptive of the article and do a good job of illustration. As above, though, they all need making smaller to avoid crushing the text too much. |
| Miscellaneous: | 4.8 | n/a |
| Final Score: | 22.8 | This is an average list, and a Worst 100 one at that. I just don't see this ever passing VFH, there's been too many, but it's a half-decent attempt at it. It could be worked into something good, but I just don't think it's a good enough concept. |
| Reviewer: | –—Hv (talk) 6/03 21:46 | |
Comment: Heerenveen, nice job for taking on such a big ol' list! I looked at that earlier, and scrolled down... and down... and down... and figured that it would have to be a weekend job with the specially big mug o' reviewin' strength tea I keep in case of emergencies. I salute you! --SirU.U.Esq. VFH | GUN | Natter | Uh oh | Pee 22:05, Mar 6