Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/User:Feengah/Middle Finger
Middle finger[edit source]
How about I put up a fairly straightforward article this time. Pee on THIS! --Feengah 07:08, July 29, 2010 (UTC)
Ill review it tomorrow...but there ain't much to review...im just to tired to right now. *yawn* --Happymonkey39 
Dah Meme Master 04:51, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
You're from Canada, so tomorrow is today in your (our?) time zone. ;) --Feengah 20:15, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
5:11 where i live tight now. I usually do stuff round 11, but i may start.., ill get it done, don't worry. --Happymonkey39 Dah Meme Master 21:12, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
| Humour: | 6.66 | ...yes your score is 6.66...what? Anyways this thing clearly looks like it took you a while...or that you copied it from some website. Either way, it's pretty freaking funny.
What would have made it a lot better is if you use F's and U's or maybe spelled out a ton of insults along the way. You could of had other little middle fingers on the page. Or have had a caption on the whole thing. Maybe made a screen-shot of the image, put it as one of those "posters" (which are the pictures with two captions and a black background). Maybe could be captions "The Middle finger", because a normal picture didn't show how much I hate you". Or anything along those lines. |
| Concept: | 8.7 | Well there isn't much a point in this article but i guess you followed your point. I mean the title is "Middle Finger"...and that pretty much sums up your article. |
| Prose and formatting: | 8 | I really don't know what to put for this in this case...i guess it's moderately tidy, but areas could be neat, mostly the boarder, it is uneven at points. |
| Images: | 10 | Well i guess it's considered a image...and it's done well so whatever. |
| Miscellaneous: | 6 | Im just going to point out the problems in the section. The pinky is a but too big, it should be smaller and on a different angle, it also looks lither there is a lump on it, and it isn't shaded well.
There shouldn't be any underscores, they don't look good and they stand out a lot. Is there a thumb?... wait, yep, there is, but it isn't shaded properly. More shade, especially where it bends. |
| Final Score: | 39.36 | Well...don't know why you put it up for pissing. But i did it anyways...they better count it as freaking in-depth. Cause if not it better not count at all.
Im getting of track, good work, it looks like it took forever and well done! |
| Reviewer: | --Happymonkey39 Dah Meme Master 21:54, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
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