Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/UnNews:Swine Flu: Murderer, or misunderstood organism?
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UnNews:Swine Flu: Murderer, or misunderstood organism?[edit source]
Helloo, basically I was quite pleased with this one, although I'd like to know what sort of changes I could make to make it so everyone is pleased with it. The grammar used is pretty much English - I think.
Sir Sunbeam no u F@H KUN 06:19, 17 July 2009 (UTC)
| Humour: | 7.5 | Not laugh-out-loud funny, but that's not really the point of this one - it's a witty and interesting "different take" on a current issue which works well as an UnNews piece. |
| Concept: | 8 | Original and well-constructed. |
| Prose and formatting: | 6 | The format would be much improved with the addition of a second image to break up the text a little. Otherwise, spot-on. |
| Images: | 7 | As already stated, another would help. Something to illustrate the "weaker members" of society that the virus attacks, perhaps...maybe a picture of Cherie Blair, who is thought to have been infected, with a caption along the lines of "Swine 'Flu is known to be particularly prevalent amongst the most worthless members of society." |
| Miscellaneous: | 8 | I like this article a lot, for its originality and wittiness. . |
| Final Score: | 36.5 | Not everybody will enjoy it as much as I did but sod 'em. Add another picture for the reasons I've already given and I'd give it higher scores all round. |
| Reviewer: | Rabbi Techno  kvetch  Contribs  FOXES 09:18, 18 July 2009 (UTC)
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