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UnNews:Bashing your head against a brick wall discovered to have hallucinogenic effects[edit source]

My second UnNews attempt. Any suggestions?---- Phlegm Leoispotter * (garble! jank!) 16:25, 10 June 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 8 I laughed a few times. Out loud. That's good.
Concept: 9 LOL at the concept.
Prose and formatting: 6 A little unprofessional at best. Should definitely be cleaned up. The problem, to me, was that in between the mock-serious tone were snippets of odd humor at best. Also, a few run-ons.
Images: 6 Only one. Post at RadicalX's Corner for some more.
Miscellaneous: 10 N/A
Final Score: 39 I liked it.
Reviewer: Sir Ljlego, GUN VFH FIYC WotM SG WHotM PWotM AotM EGAEDM ANotM + (Talk) 02:07, 11 June 2007 (UTC)