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The answer to How much wood would a woodchuck chuck if a woodchuck could chuck wood?[edit source]
could someone please review this? I want It to go on the main page, but i feel it has more potential to be a kick-ass article so i need feedback.
| Humour: | 5 | I loved the maths part; otherwise, it got old very quickly. |
| Concept: | 6 | The concept is fine for its present length. However, if you intend to make it any longer you're going to have to find some way to add a little variety to the theme. |
| Prose and formatting: | 6 | Grammar and formatting are okay. Due the nature of the gag, I had to reread several parts before they made sense to me. |
| Images: | 5 | Appropriate picture, so-so caption. |
| Miscellaneous: | 5 | Uh-huh. |
| Final Score: | 27 | I really don't know where you can take this article from here. At its present length, it already tests the reader's patience. If you lengthen it, you'd have to drop the running gag, or else find some way to add a little variety to it. My feeling on the matter is that this article is probably as good as its going to get. |
| Reviewer: | --Cap'n Sir Ben GUN WotM VFH VFP 02:49, 17 June 2007 (UTC) | |