Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Road traitoring
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Road traitoring[edit source]
--Private Gert5 UGotM10:14, 13 June 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 5 | I found it somewhat hard to understand what road traitoring was, which somewhat spoilt the entire article for me. |
| Concept: | 8 | If you can explain Road Traitoring better, and add a bit more stuff, I think this article can go places. |
| Prose and formatting: | 8 | Proper capitalization of titles is a must! I corrected the capitalization of several titles. |
| Images: | 8 | I think you probably could add funnier pictures and clean up the caption on the Hitler picture, but I found the 2nd picture extremly funny. |
| Miscellaneous: | 7 | I didn't get a few of the things in the article, such as the last sentence in the Crazed Idiot section |
| Final Score: | 36 | I found it somewhat hard to absorb, so please try to spread out the information a bit over a large page by adding more details and less main ideas. I'll help you write this article if you want me to. |
| Reviewer: | --Maharaja Hdgcfcf |  | User Page | Talk | Go Kill Yourself 17:48, 13 June 2007 (UTC)
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