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Peace Corps[edit source]
I rewrote this one from the ground up... --~ 
Jacques Pirat, Esq. Converse : Benefactions : U.w.p.
02:40, 2 June 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 7 | Rather more classically satirical than comical. |
| Concept: | 8 | Good idea. |
| Prose and formatting: | 6 | Need a bit of touch-up. I changed "marshall law" to martial law, but unclear passages remain. "...A day which certainly would have been in mourning" for instance. A day on which the nation would have mourned? A day which would have been mourned by the nation? |
| Images: | 9 | Good use of historical and photochopped images. |
| Miscellaneous: | 8 | I like the piece. It's got a bit of political bite. |
| Final Score: | 38 | |
| Reviewer: | ----OEJ 19:54, 3 June 2007 (UTC) | |