Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Letter to You in Rateme.com
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Letter to You in Rateme.com[edit source]
I know its a bit short, but I can't really think of how to make it much longer. So tell me what you think! 
Pirate Lord__Sonic80 (Yell • Latest literary excretion) __ 21:13, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
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Tagstit doesn't believe in new fancy-pancy toilet systems with running water and all. Just a hole in the ground with a lil' cover will do. Now gimme' your article and I'll be done in a few minutes.
While you are welcome to review this, I suggest you find another article in need of help so that we can clear the ever growing Pee Request list. |
| Humour: | 5 | The humour was great in this article, despite the weak concept. It is funny how far he stretches it with his jokes and his exagerations and so on. It was written in a very funny way. The reason I gave it a lower score, is because it has been done before. The jokes about inbreeding and horrible ugliness are said all the time, and although it is entertaining to read, it isn't original or fresh so to speak. I understand most of the time it is a concept problem, but it was more in the jokes this time, that they seemed overused. There really isn't much you can do about that because that is the center focus of this article. Maybe you should come up with another direction this could go, like the guy rambles and talks about something else. |
| Concept: | 6 | The concept was alright. The repetiveness described above kinda hurts the concept, but I think this could end up very strong. If you were to just take it in a few more directions you could fix the length issues, as well as the issue of repeating what has been run down into the ground. But that is just me, another person might think it is great so another few opinions may help before you make any big decisions. |
| Prose and formatting: | 10 | Perfect format and no spelling errors (from what I can see), making this article feel very professional and easy to read. Nice job here, I couldn't have written it better myself. But don't take that as a compliment because I am a noob. |
| Images: | 7 | The images seemed to fit and they were funny and not random. The only thing I could recommend here is that you get a picture of what the letter is actually talking about. The one that got a 1/10. That might help in someway and make the article funnier, but then again, its your choice. |
| Miscellaneous: | 7 | Averaged |
| Final Score: | 35 | I liked this. I thought it was funny and well written. I think if you got a bit more clever with the jokes this could really shape up to be an awesome article. Good luck! |
| Reviewer: | --Tagstit 00:48, 19 January 2009 (UTC) | |