Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Grass in the Mist 2
User:THE/Grass in the Mist 2[edit source]
Well, I never thought I'd write a sequel to Grass in the Mist, but then this idea came along and I thought "What the hell. I'll go for it." As the author, I can't judge it very well. The only thing I know for sure is that it's longer and more preposterous. Other than that, I've no idea. I'd really appreciate an in-depth review. What are the weakest points? Should I shorten it? How does it compare to the first one? Is it...any good? --THE 00:30, 5 December 2007 (UTC)
| Grass in the Mist 2 is being reviewed by Your Source for Fine Scented Pee And Whatever Else Comes Out Of Him |
Grass in the mist? Uh oh, I have some extra reading to do... • <-> (Dec 8 / 16:20)
- Let me just say: How did the original hilarious article pass me by??? ...holy crap that's funny. Okay, begin review! • <-> (Dec 8 / 18:12)
| Humour: | 8.8 | avg of each section
Your writing style is pretty similar to mine, I think. We're both kinda "out there" if you know what I mean. I didn't give you a 10 because this isn't exactly an addition to GitM, it could be a sequel to any documentary, really.
Yes, again though it could be a sequel to anything really.
Perfect.
Still lots of lols, but... are you sniffing glue? I ask because, uh... (too random to be perfect)
Are you snorting ajax? Zippy's cooler than Spiffy, but, still something is lost in the translation from THE to human.
Are you licking waterbuffalo? By the way, this isn't Africa, is it?
uuuuuuhhhhhhhhhh... I thought I was good at reviewing but I don't know what to say
Nice ending. Obviously that moron didn't have any possessions! |
| Concept: | 8 | A winner, but it is still a sequel. You are a very good writer. |
| Prose and formatting: | 9 | Good formatting.
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| Images: | 0 | *OOF!* duh, no pictures!
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| Miscellaneous: | 6.5 | avg |
| Final Score: | 32.3 | Throw it on mainspace, it's ready. That was fun to read, although it was extremely long. It would be okay to get rid of one of those scenes. I think the weakest scene was maybe the fourth one... I'm not sure what else to say! Go ahead and bother me if you want a rereview |
| Reviewer: | • <-> (Dec 8 / 21:04) | |